RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Gold Star - 123,271 Points (October 6,1950 / New Jersey)

Rhythm Of Eternity - Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Listening to that lonesome whistle as the train comes
passing by.

Wintering thoughts come into mind, filling intellect
with their cold and lonely ideas.

Feelings of abandonment building within, totally
scattering emotions as they come into sight, letting
them all fill me with their verve and energy.

A total being filled with the rhythm of eternity.


Comments about Rhythm Of Eternity by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

  • Khairul Ahsan (3/18/2015 12:44:00 PM)


    It's a wonderful poem with a very poetic caption.
    'lonesome whistle'? - A great expression.
    'cold and lonely ideas' - subtle thoughts...
    'A total being filled with the rhythm of eternity.' - A total beauty!
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 18, 2015



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