M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,498 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Rich Green Blades Of Life - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

When winter is on
the grass dance
to the tunes of dews
the wind carries lusty scent
and sunrays are gentle
the clouds are thick and rich
and ocean play symphony
radiant spring blooms
the spring time is a gift from God

Yellow faces of daffodils
sings and dances
and occasional rain
resounds pit, pat, pit, pat
mixing memory and desire
of mellower season

No gem or gold can give this pleasure
No melody is better than the harvest song
When ice is in making
the world looks good enough to bite
and the melting world in mouth
give true taste of winter season.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature, winter

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is dedicated to Mr.Kumarmani Mahakul, A true nature lover, Philosopher and a gifted poet.

Comments about Rich Green Blades Of Life by M. Asim Nehal

  • (12/3/2015 12:59:00 AM)


    Wonderful poem on winter GBU Asim. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/15/2015 11:32:00 AM)


    Winter is a great season and now after reading this poem I will enjoy it more. Thanks / Sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2015 3:53:00 AM)


    and yet your poetic thoughts didn't freeze
    thanks Asim-10
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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/14/2015 12:51:00 AM)


    The whole poem is rich with beauuuutiful imagery... loved the way you described winter. The last stanza is extraordinary, reading again. Beyond rating. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/14/2015 12:20:00 AM)


    Winter dances on grasses in this amazing imagery shared here. Clouds are thick and rich to do rain of fragrances in spring to sing glory of God. Yes harvest song gives very nice and interesting melody is very natural. This is very inspiring and educative. You have given a surprise. I am delighted and deeply touched by your poetic gift. May Allah bring lots of happiness for you and your family. Very Very NICE....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 14, 2015



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