Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 496,585 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Right There - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Right there

You shall never get
A point to relate
You may feel wind
But not find

You may smell
But may not be able to tell
Exactly how you feel
It shall be just real

Think of beauty
And remember an almighty
He is there to bless people
Who not only may look good but beautiful too?

So you stand nowhere
And you can't dare also
You want o be right there
But may be warned or feared

Love to see beautiful objects
But do not spoil them with acts
Preserve nicely of you can
And be lover of nature and fan

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/17/2016 4:51:00 AM)


    welcome Kunnathuveettilravindranath and Thel Suaidi like this Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/17/2016 4:50:00 AM)


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/17/2016 4:49:00 AM)


    welcome Gloria Rodikis, Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • (1/16/2016 6:00:00 AM)


    The Nature and the God have created so many wonderful things which you can not see but experience their existence through sensory organs. A meaningful write. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (1/15/2016 9:49:00 PM)


    very fine writing sir, namaskar.. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/15/2016 7:52:00 PM)


    Love to see beautiful objects
    But do not spoil them with acts
    Preserve nicely of you can
    And be lover of nature and fan
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 15, 2016



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