Thursday, February 22, 2018

River Comments

Rating: 5.0

I just wanna stare at the river.. For
time makes me shiver.. Wrap my shawl,
around tight. Stay here, all night..
Listen to the lonely, night birds call..
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Rebecca Navarre
COMMENTS
Seamus O Brian 24 February 2018

You create such a strong, vivid image of a moment in time. Your rhyming and the cadence of the rhythm capture the reader, but then the last line wakes us up to entirely new thoughts. Very artfully accomplished, Rebecca. :)

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Rebecca Navarre 24 February 2018

Thank You! ! ! Seamus, For Such A Very Beautiful And Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Holds A Powerful Beauty Deep! ! ! ! ! As With Such Soul It Does Speak! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2018

Beautifully captured the melancholy and sadness through the river. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 23 February 2018

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Such A Beautifully Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Beautifully Described Painted With Nature And Beautiful Spirit Inside! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 February 2018

A lovely poem that echoes sadness. A write full of vivid images.

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Rebecca Navarre 23 February 2018

Thank You! ! ! Rose, For Such A Very Kind, And Reflective Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Of Beautiful Heart, Kind, Strong, And Powerful To Readers Mind! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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