I just wanna stare at the river.. For
time makes me shiver.. Wrap my shawl,
around tight. Stay here, all night..
Listen to the lonely, night birds call..
As the moon's, shadows fall.. Casting a
familiar aura to it all.. Thought it was
spring.. But, I watch the leaves fall..
Beautifully captured the melancholy and sadness through the river. Thanks for sharing.
Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Such A Beautifully Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Beautifully Described Painted With Nature And Beautiful Spirit Inside! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !
A lovely poem that echoes sadness. A write full of vivid images.
Thank You! ! ! Rose, For Such A Very Kind, And Reflective Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Of Beautiful Heart, Kind, Strong, And Powerful To Readers Mind! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You create such a strong, vivid image of a moment in time. Your rhyming and the cadence of the rhythm capture the reader, but then the last line wakes us up to entirely new thoughts. Very artfully accomplished, Rebecca. :)
Thank You! ! ! Seamus, For Such A Very Beautiful And Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Holds A Powerful Beauty Deep! ! ! ! ! As With Such Soul It Does Speak! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! :)