River, Struggle, And Music Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

River, Struggle, And Music

Rating: 5.0


As the river flows
Smoothly as it goes,
No music follows.
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Haiku | 11.08.14 |

Friday, June 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: music,river,struggle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Only when the flow of a river is not smooth, chunks of rocks blocking her passage, the river struggling to find the way ahead, is the music created. If there is no struggle there is no music.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 June 2019

No struggle no music...taking this theme this has been executed A nice poem TFS.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 June 2019

Thanks Kumarmaniji for visiting

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2019

Muse of the flow! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 June 2019

Thanks for reading the poem. The river hurtling down a hilly terrain, creating that rare music sends me, not that mini ocean near the sea.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 June 2019

A brilliant piece of work sir! I feel a fathomless depth in this little work of just eleven words......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 June 2019

Thanks indeed Dr Swain for the good words and the rating of 10.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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