Friday, June 21, 2019

River, Struggle, And Music Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the river flows
Smoothly as it goes,
No music follows.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 June 2019

No struggle no music...taking this theme this has been executed A nice poem TFS.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 June 2019

Thanks Kumarmaniji for visiting

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2019

Muse of the flow! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 June 2019

Thanks for reading the poem. The river hurtling down a hilly terrain, creating that rare music sends me, not that mini ocean near the sea.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 June 2019

A brilliant piece of work sir! I feel a fathomless depth in this little work of just eleven words......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 June 2019

Thanks indeed Dr Swain for the good words and the rating of 10.

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