Road Haiku Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Road Haiku



fork in the road...
standing still to hear
the leaves

Honorable Mention, the Winter Moon Awards for Haiku 2010

Judge's Comment:

I could make this symbolic: what do the trees tell me, which direction should I take; but I choose to imagine myself standing at the fork, closing my eyes, just listening to the sound of leaves before I move on. I like that the poem is larger than itself.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 24 July 2012

quite interesting Haiku! Congratulations!

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