Roads In Life Poem by Jim McGill

Roads In Life

Rating: 5.0


In life
All roads have ups and downs
If too close together
We call them potholes


Jim McGill, May,2023

Thursday, May 18, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: Life,Roads,poems,poem,Haiku
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first ‘Haiku'….not quite there yet, right? Still on the road I guess.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 29 May 2023

I don't care for potholes! But your poem slowed me down a bit!

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Jim McGill 10 June 2023

Thank you. Great one liner.

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Diana Kojira 18 May 2023

I like this poem, it is very simple and true. The life has ups and downs and at the end of all, we can enjoy both.

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Jim McGill 10 June 2023

True. Thank you

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Ana Pérez 18 May 2023

I really like your poem, is interesting and it makes me feel you lost someone. You use alliteration in your poem in the therd line 'too' and 'together' Keep continue writting.

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