Some Poem by Jim McGill
Some
Some do
Some don't
Some will
Some won't
Some can
Some can't
Some shall
Some shan't
Some there
Some here
Some smile
Some snear
Some listen
Some talk
Some praise
Some mock
Some polite
Some rude
Some gallant
Some crude
Some cower
Some fearless
Some cheery
Some cheerless
Some bright
Some dull
Some collect
Some cull
Some start
Some finish
Some fat
Some thinnish
Some hide
Some show
Some search
Some know
Some stop
Some go
Some reap
Some sow
Some first
Some last
Some slow
Some fast
Some get
Some give
Some die…
Some live
"Some poem! " I like that. For me, rhyme is hard work. I never seems to cone easy. Thank you for reading it.
It all adds up to balance. Some condense, some drag out. This is a celebration of pared-down language.
Simpler would be: Some condense // Some expand. It's sort of Yin / Yang opposites that balance. Thank you for reading it.
Thank you. I try to keep things simple. Add humour if I can. Sometimes I get it right…sometimes I don't. I appreciate your feed back.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 10:50:52 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Jim, I plan to put this poem into my June 2023 Showcase of PH poems I share with members. bri ;)