Piranhas In Your Bathtub Poem by Jim McGill

Piranhas In Your Bathtub

Rating: 4.6


If you are dumb enough to keep
piranhas in your bathtub
Don't complain when your butt
becomes their dinner grub

Friday, January 6, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: Greed
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is an allegory for excessive greed. My apologies to the piranhas. The people who inspired this poem make piranhas look like good guys.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 07 January 2023

WHO are they? The people.......Poem full of enjoyment.

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Jim McGill 16 January 2023

Sorry. I thought I had replied to you, but I just realized that the message was too verbose for this format and did not get sent to you. So I will now answer your question in 2 parts.

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Jim McGill 16 January 2023

The scammer was and still is his employee. He is still blinded by her promises and still loosing a lot of money.

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Ruth Walters 20 August 2023

I love your sense of humour, it's great to laugh at life......

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M. Asim Nehal 12 June 2023

Yeah they will be -less afterwards.

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

I'd use 'tub', not 'bathtub', for smoothness in reading. 4 stars

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Jim McGill 09 June 2023

I see it as 4 beats - piranhas in your bathtub - becomes their dinner grub

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

The title seemed SO familiar. Could it REALLY be that I read and commented on it already, less than 6 months ago? ? ? ? Incredible if true.

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Jim McGill 09 June 2023

Yup! Yuh did.

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Sandra Feldman 13 February 2023

Getting a laugh for a change. Thanks for the originality and teaching humor of this poem.

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