The ocean is wide
Roars in her own soul inside
With current and tide.
Roaring of sea Buzzing of bee All I can hear when I'm not buzy)))) ******************** I like your haiku......'tis a nature haiku! ! !
You tell us a real thing. Thank you. I like it very much. The poem is very good.Thanks Thanks.............
Ocean, Green or blue or iron-gray' As the light strikes you' Primordial flood, Relentless and remorseless Like a woman in rage. Mongameli Mabona's THE SEA is reminded by this short poem beautifully written...
Turbulence on the surface secret something wide Mystical the ocean too have posses mystery inside Unrevealed until we dive deep to see never seen side Now we know discover life as we know how to get bright_UNwritten Soul
Holymoly, holydooly! This poem on nature simple, straight forward yet it has a divine charm or may be the charm of nature itself... This poem is totally different from other poems and has fresh look of the teen girl, Great going and hope that you can wrought many similar wonders on Nature, the mighty stature... the poem is rated A1!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a very nice haiku, the word ''roaring'' signifies a lot , in our life too...hence a good use of the metaphor. I like the little poem very much.