Rose Poem by Aditya Mudbhary

Rose

Rating: 5.0


It was love at first sight,
When i saw thee pretty face,
Nature sang songs,
With passion, love and grace.

I looked up to thee,
As if thy were my Juliet,
Although you saw me nothing,
As thee were already playing a duet.

The graceful darkness,
Surrounded me with truth,
It took me into ecstasy,
Although it took its loot.

And there i stand like a ugly rose,
One of its kind giving a dying pose,
leaning down as if thy heart were too heavy,
Exposed to love although the rose was unworthy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 18 October 2009

It's not the problem of the Rose Eddy, nothing is certain along this sojourn road.

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Patrick A. Martin 18 October 2009

Now this is the one I've been waiting for you need to change one you to a thee and there you are.-----BIG 10

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Tracey Wynn 17 October 2009

Very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. You expressed your thoughts well on seeing love at first sight. I give you a 10 for this. Good piece

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Terence Nabbs 17 October 2009

hi eddy my rose has bloomed for 43 short years terry

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Aldo Rino Smiloveux-bell 12 October 2009

You shouldn't give up on her. Love is worth fighting for.

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Bobert Smithsonian III 28 February 2010

Wonderful, Eddy. I loved it.

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Anne Unknown 25 February 2010

beautiful.....it made me speechless. it is very poetic and romantic

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Kali Abyss 01 November 2009

This is beautiful i really like it =)

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Obinna Eruchie 30 October 2009

It is sweet and cute.

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Nalathai Vongjalorn 23 October 2009

WOW very nice poem 10++++

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