Rhyming I see you.
O rose of pink colours,
soul's beauty in your fragrance
ecstatic I see the whole world is.
Make it up
all that I see is ugly,
rusted beliefs,
ideologies stale,
evolutionary are your revolutionary rhymes.
Join the whole world
Europe, Africa, Australia
America and Asia.
Nightingales everywhere will sing for you.
And I see your poems are erasing
ugliness of hate
selfish nationalism
terror and proxy wars.
Insight of a poetess like you
needs the whole world to be beautiful once again.
There is no greater satisfaction than to receive a wonderful comment due to a work you have done. But to be put in a beautiful poem is mind blowing. I came here on this site unarmed, without any single attribute of a Poet. Poetry was foreign to me. I relied purely on.my heart and wit that I could someday make one poem. The death of.my father fueled.me to write Poetry.
The ultimate stanza of this poem touches the.core of my heart And I cried when I read it. You have given an answer to my ultimate dream in life. There is nothing I can ask more. If there is one that I can touch through my poetry, than the purpose of writing had been served..
" And I see your poems are erasing Ugliness of hate, selfish nationalism terror and.proxy wars Insight of.a.poetess.like you needs the. whole world to be beautiful once again." Beautiful lines from a wonderful poem. For a great man, great poet and.philosopher to say these words meant a lot to me.
In my entire stay here at Poem Hunter, I have always look up to you as a great man who can tame the wind.. You have maintained your calmness and composure amid the roughness of the sea.
A gorgeous poem on Poetess Rose Marie Juan Austin. Acrostic poem that rhymes with the beauty of the soul. When the inner core of the heart is beautiful, the whole world is beautiful too. A most deserving and wonderful poem, Akhtar Sahab.....10
My Great Compliments, Akhtar Sir for this captivating Acrostic poem. May God grant Rose Marie aka Mrs. Juan-Austin a long and healthy life. You have superbly worded this gorgeous poem into a Beautiful Acrostic God's Blessings in Abundance for thee and thy beloved family. Amen. a 10++++++++++++++++++++ for the ratings/ Vote
And I see your poems are erasing ugliness of hate selfish nationalism terror and proxy wars. Insight of a poetess like you needs the whole world to be beautiful once again. You are quite right when you wrote here that her poems are erasing ugliness of hate. She represents Beauty-self
Join the whole world Europe, Africa, Australia America and Asia. Nightingales everywhere will sing for you. Your beautiful imaginations know no bounds, Sir! Loveliest!
Make it up all that I see is ugly, rusted beliefs, ideologies stale, evolutionary are your revolutionary rhymes Those revolutionary rhymes, we could all read in her Absolute Power poem POTD recently, WOW! Amazing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow, what a wonderful poem, Sir Akhtar. One of the best poems I have ever read. It is.not that the poem was written for me but because of its beauty and the universal and meaningful message that have been embedded in this tribute. I concur with Khalida Bano Ali's wonderful comment.