M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,655 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Rubaiyat - Deceived - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

How could death part me from her?
When I practiced for many years
To deceive the sleep by leaving body alone
And meet my lovers’ soul.

Topic(s) of this poem: love, love and life, rubaiyat

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Rubaiyat - Deceived by M. Asim Nehal

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/26/2015 7:15:00 AM)


    The relationship of two souls is immortal. A nice four liner. (Report) Reply

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  • Alice Perfect (11/21/2015 12:34:00 PM)


    where has her soul moved to?

    why?

    a stimulating write!
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  • (11/21/2015 10:48:00 AM)


    What a way to convey the message....... To deceive the sleep by leaving body alone
    And meet my lovers’ soul.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 19, 2015



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