Rubaiyat - Desire And Wants Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat - Desire And Wants

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He burnt the candle at both the ends
Thinking it will give him more light
And his desire proved him wrong
Since his wishes were more than the wants

Thursday, January 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,life and death,rubaiyat
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 28 January 2016

More light it did give But only half the time the light did live!

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M Asim Nehal 28 January 2016

Thanks much for nice comment.

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Anjandev Roy 20 December 2022

Excellent work.....my friend.......

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 December 2022

I hope I am not doing that Bravo!

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T Rajan Evol 02 February 2016

Wise words Asim......Extremely meaningful.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 28 January 2016

Aag bhi lage ghar bhi na jale....charag jalaun magar ungliyan na jala.... As usual wonderful thoughts.....thank you for sharing sir :)

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M Asim Nehal 28 January 2016

Thanks much for lovely comment.

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 January 2016

KHvaahishen itnii ba.Dhii insaan aadhaa rah gayaa KHvaab jo dekhaa nahii.n vo bhii adhuuraa rah gayaa Ye Akhtar Hoshiyarpuri ka sher aapki nazr. Khwahishon ki koi had nahi... aur jab ye khwahishein apne pair phailaane lagti hai to haath kuch nahi aata hai. khoobsurat Rubaai. Sabak amoz.10 plussss kam lagta hai.

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M Asim Nehal 28 January 2016

Bahot bohot sukhriya....Mohtarma.

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