M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,355 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Rubaiyat - Desire And Wants - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

He burnt the candle at both the ends
Thinking it will give him more light
And his desire proved him wrong
Since his wishes were more than he wants

Topic(s) of this poem: desire, life and death, rubaiyat

Form: Quatrain


Comments about Rubaiyat - Desire And Wants by M. Asim Nehal

  • (2/2/2016 9:13:00 AM)


    Wise words Asim......Extremely meaningful. (Report) Reply

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  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/28/2016 9:00:00 AM)


    Aag bhi lage ghar bhi na jale....charag jalaun magar ungliyan na jala....

    As usual wonderful thoughts.....thank you for sharing sir :)
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/28/2016 11:12:00 AM)

    Thanks much for lovely comment.

  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/28/2016 8:58:00 AM)


    KHvaahishen itnii ba.Dhii insaan aadhaa rah gayaa
    KHvaab jo dekhaa nahii.n vo bhii adhuuraa rah gayaa

    Ye Akhtar Hoshiyarpuri ka sher aapki nazr. Khwahishon ki koi had nahi... aur jab ye khwahishein apne pair phailaane lagti hai to haath kuch nahi aata hai. khoobsurat Rubaai. Sabak amoz.10 plussss kam lagta hai.
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/28/2016 11:11:00 AM)

    Bahot bohot sukhriya....Mohtarma.

  • Kim Barney (1/28/2016 8:57:00 AM)


    More light it did give
    But only half the time
    the light did live!
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/28/2016 11:12:00 AM)

    Thanks much for nice comment.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2016

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 28, 2016


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