Rubaiyat - Lost Ways Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat - Lost Ways

Rating: 5.0


They left to make Castle for self
By destroying the hut they lived in for long
Both became elusive, when time gave the call
Heart stopped, neither time extended nor the life.

Wednesday, April 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophy,rubaiyat,wisdom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Basti gaye ujad ke mehal tameer karne
Ye bhi gaya hath Se wo bhi mila nahi
Jab waqt ne dastak di dil tham sa gaya
Mohlat ke khayal mein hisab ki baari aa gayi
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 17 June 2016

What a wise write. At the end, man is empty-handed. A palace is no refuge from death. Excellent.10 absolutely.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 April 2016

Elusive! ! ! Nice work.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 April 2016

Elusive! ! Nice work.

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