Tuesday, August 14, 2007

Rumor (C) 8-14-07 Comments

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You walk into school and you have an awkward feeling your being watched
Then people are pointing, staring, laughing, and whispering about you
Your totally oblivious to the surrounding crowd and you continue to go by
Then you ask whats so funny why is everyone laughing without you
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D H 06 April 2010

Ouch rumors! ! I hate them but I know how you feel in this poem. Great poem about being ruined by a rumor

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Ramin Chaman 25 September 2009

your poem is very pure and full of significance...

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Jemarie Ragudo 15 August 2007

Rumors are usually nasty and they truly hurt. But if they are lies, they will soon end and not worth a sleepless night. Good poem.

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

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