Rustling Deep Within Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Rustling Deep Within

Rating: 5.0


Walking along the golden meadows
side. Watching the changing of the
colors in the sky. A deep moon inside.
A night hawk leaves its shadowed site.
Streaks into the light. A rustling of
the wind. Time stops to paint life,
and then begins again.

Sunday, November 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: moments,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 11 November 2018

Absolutely Breathtaking! Read and See, Don't forget To catch your breath After Read.

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Rebecca Navarre 13 November 2018

And smiles! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 13 November 2018

Dear Sandra, Thank you ever so much for such a beautiful reply! .. :) Your poetry has such a special beauty and light, that illuminates the night and touches hearts so bright :) bringing such meaning, inspiration and delight! .. Thank you ever so much! .. :) Ever so very many blessings! ..

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Sandra Feldman 11 November 2018

If ever a masterpiece was painted with words this is it. So beautifully, poetically and vividly put together it is a true painting that the mind and eyes can see, touching the soul. Remarkable and Amazing! It will be one of my most loved paintings from now on. Admired and reread, many times as one of my most favorite poems.

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Rebecca Navarre 13 November 2018

I have yours saved too! .. means a lot :)

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Rebecca Navarre 13 November 2018

Goodness Sandra you make me blush! .. Thank you ever so much for such a beautifully heartwarming and inspiring reply! .. Your poetry has such beauty as it sings, that's ever so heart moving it brings, such beautiful feelings within! .. Thank you ever so much! Ever so many blessings! ..

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