Under The Suns Light Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Under The Suns Light

Rating: 4.5


Up above the sky so high. Reaching
out to the clouds drifting by. While sitting
here on the mountain side. With golden
sunflowers down below. Grateful to let
time move so slow. Watching the cotton
as it floats across the sky, glowing in the
suns brilliant light. Catch it gently within
my grasp, close my eyes tight. Make a
wish with all my might... And let it go, out
amongst the winds that blow. What it'll
touch, where it'll land I do not know.

Under The Suns Light
Saturday, March 12, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 13 March 2022

Very elegant and enchanting ??

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 March 2022

A very captive loveliest poem, my ddae Becca,5 Stars full score and more! A very pleasant read and this poem I treasure in my heart. God's Abundant Blessings for YOU, my dearest Becca!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 March 2022

I cite your last line: What it'll touch, where it'll land I do not know. Fascinatingly conclusion, crystal clear to watch them drifting by. Let go! Mesmrerizing cutest poem

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Richard Wlodarski 13 March 2022

Beautifully crafted poem with great imagery! Rebecca, it would make a great song.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 March 2022

This is an adorable piece of poetry dear poetess....sincerely appreciated.5 stars.

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

oh and a five star rating of course!

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

It will drift around and touch all of us who are honored to know your sweet heart! favorite

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

And let it go, out amongst the winds that blow. What it'll touch, where it'll land I do not know.---I know! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2022

A well crafted poem so beautifully and tenderly expressed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2022

The beautiful images in this poem made me at close range with this breathtaking scenery. The wonders of nature indeed hold us spellbound!

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