With his wife he lies content
on Saturday morning.
In the sky above their home
the sound of a small plane passing by.
Which brings to mind a little boat—
half-horse engine rippling slowly
to the middle of a sheltered lake—
play of sun and shade, warm and cool—
the perfect time of day.
In it a man in floppy hat
has sons who make him worry—
he lets it go.
A house to work on
with no time nor money to get it done—
he lets that go.
A fishing license
that he left on top his dresser—
he would rather eat chicken anyway.
He cuts the engine
arranges cooler, pillow, hat
exhales a sigh as he lowers himself back
then lets the boat just drift—
rocking slightly as he dozes.
This is a man who will be refreshed by a Sabbath of his devising and a way of spending it in restorative idleness. So the real Sabbath, that formal Day of Rest which rarely is restful, is a metaphor for this personal variation. I like the way he chants a liturgy for his freedom paralleling the liturgy of prayers in a service. He has to do that w-o-r-k before he can sink back in relaxation. He has to create the occasion for reverie just as prayers create the occasion of religious peace. But the effort pays off: that is one very contented man at the end. Your poem provides us a blueprint.
hey, daniel! thanks for reading and commenting on this poem. as in yours observing people in and around the lake, we are graced with such moments and appreciate them- stolen or snatched from the rhythms of work or effort and letting go. be blessed! -glen
I enjoyed it even more the second time! So the sound of the plane engine took him on a journey? Out on a sleepy lake in a rocking boat - sounds like a place I'd like to be... I'm off to bed.
Another lovely one, Glen! I ilke your style. And the way you look at yourself from above. Yes, I see what you mean about letting go - interesting that we had a similar thought. But I like the detail you include in yours.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
He lets that go. - What you always remind me of is that you don't have to be a revolutionary or overcoming a traumatic childhood or fighting the demons of your own brain's chemistry to be a poet. We all have things that we need to let go of, and many of your poems suggest effective ways to do that. I tip my fishing hat to you ;)
suzanne, thanks for following up and for your kind comments on this poem. i acknowledge your hat-tipping and say that though i'm not a fisherman, i've enjoyed the fresh catch of those who are. -glen