Sabbath Reverie, A Home Pome Poem by Glen Kappy

Sabbath Reverie, A Home Pome



With his wife he lies content
on Saturday morning.

In the sky above their home
the sound of a small plane passing by.

Which brings to mind a little boat—
half-horse engine rippling slowly
to the middle of a sheltered lake—

play of sun and shade, warm and cool—
the perfect time of day.

In it a man in floppy hat
has sons who make him worry—
he lets it go.

A house to work on
with no time nor money to get it done—
he lets that go.

A fishing license
that he left on top his dresser—
he would rather eat chicken anyway.

He cuts the engine
arranges cooler, pillow, hat
exhales a sigh as he lowers himself back

then lets the boat just drift—
rocking slightly as he dozes.

Tuesday, June 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: responsibility,relaxing,boat,content,dreaming,fishing,husband,marriage,release,releasing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suzanne Hayasaki 01 July 2018

He lets that go. - What you always remind me of is that you don't have to be a revolutionary or overcoming a traumatic childhood or fighting the demons of your own brain's chemistry to be a poet. We all have things that we need to let go of, and many of your poems suggest effective ways to do that. I tip my fishing hat to you ;)

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Glen Kappy 02 July 2018

suzanne, thanks for following up and for your kind comments on this poem. i acknowledge your hat-tipping and say that though i'm not a fisherman, i've enjoyed the fresh catch of those who are. -glen

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Daniel Brick 21 June 2017

This is a man who will be refreshed by a Sabbath of his devising and a way of spending it in restorative idleness. So the real Sabbath, that formal Day of Rest which rarely is restful, is a metaphor for this personal variation. I like the way he chants a liturgy for his freedom paralleling the liturgy of prayers in a service. He has to do that w-o-r-k before he can sink back in relaxation. He has to create the occasion for reverie just as prayers create the occasion of religious peace. But the effort pays off: that is one very contented man at the end. Your poem provides us a blueprint.

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Glen Kappy 22 June 2017

hey, daniel! thanks for reading and commenting on this poem. as in yours observing people in and around the lake, we are graced with such moments and appreciate them- stolen or snatched from the rhythms of work or effort and letting go. be blessed! -glen

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Laurie Van Der Hart 05 February 2017

I enjoyed it even more the second time! So the sound of the plane engine took him on a journey? Out on a sleepy lake in a rocking boat - sounds like a place I'd like to be... I'm off to bed.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 20 October 2016

Another lovely one, Glen! I ilke your style. And the way you look at yourself from above. Yes, I see what you mean about letting go - interesting that we had a similar thought. But I like the detail you include in yours.

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