Sad Woman Poem by Marieta Maglas

Sad Woman

Rating: 5.0


If I opened my heart to show you
The love I could keep inside of me,
You will see there's something you can do,
And I would pray for you on my knee.

If you told me that you should leave me
And no longer should I wait for you,
I would tell you, 'I can't set you free,
'Cause for you was all I've tried to do.'

I cannot cope with sadness at night,
Although you had to follow your way.
My heart, once singing its songs of light,
Buries in melancholy, today.

I swim in my ocean of darkness.
I pray in my solitude, I'm pure.
I wait for you, my life is hopeless
I'm not able more woe to endure.


Poem by Marieta Maglas

Sunday, June 7, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: hopeless,solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Breslin 18 November 2009

My thoughts are an ocean of darkness, My solitude is a chosen pray, is pure 10

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Jeremy Wright 18 November 2009

A beautifully worded poem, heartfelt and touching. 10

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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009

nice poem, touching 10

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Ravi Sathasivam 02 September 2009

Very touching poem. Bring back some old memories. Sad but expressed well. I like this poem

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a heartfelt poem... I touched your sadness. your deep expressions were penetrated my soul. great. great.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 January 2010

‘…My solitude is a chosen pray, is pure….’ Excellent line…touchy…hearty… Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Allan O 18 November 2009

loss is a great sadness..i understand...and the oceans of darkness...very nicely written..thank you Marieta ~^..^

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Beatriz Hutton 18 November 2009

Thank you for telling me about it! I think I understand it 10

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Gwenda Madison 18 November 2009

Amazing poem. Very intelligently woven..Great work... 10

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Edward Parsley 18 November 2009

this is such a great poem and the words flow beautifully 10

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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