Saintly Gerard Heals Mama Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Saintly Gerard Heals Mama

Rating: 5.0


He's in such pain
When ma is sick
Like he's more ill
Won't take the pill

Ma lying down now
With kewpie cushion
Ice pack on her head
Feels his warm touch

This angel on divine mission
In cold and late of such worst night
Muffcap drawn over raw ears
Braces for dark storms of the night

Even such damn frozen night
Cannot break his saintly heart
Feverishly racing start
To finish line of drug store

Friday, April 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: mother,mother and child ,nature,pain,painful,sacred heart,sacrifice,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 21 April 2018

it feels fragmentary, but whole, as if its broken into distinct thoughts that tell a story. Some beautifully worded stuff, there's a tragedy in this that makes it all more urgent.

0 0 Reply
Richard Wlodarski 22 April 2018

Kevin, this type of feedback is extremely valuable for me. You're right on target. In this Kerouac Series, I'm trying to sum up Kerouac's life as succinctly as possible. Because his brother Gerard was such a precious part of his life, I've had to include him in the series. His story is really fascinating. Thank you so much for your astute observations!

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success