Oh what salvation lies
In rain’s musical note
That gathers the dreams for eyes
Makes reality remote.
So nicely crafted and rain's musical beat does bring dreams and redemption............. very sweet
I could hear the sounds of rain in my inner ear, so deep. I love it. Mohabeer Beeharry
I love falling asleep to the sound of rain - so soothing. Great poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great read; it's so difficult to capture so many ideas in such a short poem, but you do it wonderfully.