Sands Of Time Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Sands Of Time

Rating: 4.4


It was a time gone by
a time with no goodbye
but I left you
in the sand and the wind

You gave me your hand
but I couldn't hold on
you was taken
by the winds of time

Sands of time
blowing in the wind
when will they come for me
when will they come for me

I see your soul
dancing in the sands of time
I hold out my hand
but I just feel the sand and the wind
god forgive me

I can't go on
living in a world I don't belong
see my soul flying in the night
I will find you
no matter how long
I will find you

Sands of time
blowing in the wind
when will they come for me
when will they come for me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uche Chidozie 28 September 2011

Poem sounds like, a loved one is gone and you wish to go with him, through sand of time, who comes to takes away anything, good job! ! !

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Ashley Bachtel 29 September 2011

Awe... That's sad hun..

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Suvro Bhattacharya 29 September 2011

DAVE my dear friend and poet! Yes you are a nice painter of feelings! Your brush strokes are smooth and dances like a ballet dancer! We are proud of you!

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Ratha Hou 01 October 2011

love it chief keep it up boss... :)

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Ovidd 01 October 2011

Nice poem, full of passion.

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T. R. Crissian 28 November 2011

This here is a very touching poem...

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Kaila George 23 November 2011

Its a poem of forbidden love...so it seems to me...or am I reading it wrong...as for Denis...hmmm...you could of at least messaged him in private...as for the poem...its quite poetic and lovely....i think its brillant

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 08 October 2011

this seems like a song with the repetition of lines and the sand and the wind are so symbolic and your asking them when will they come for you is an act of bravery seems like you are not afraid to die

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Benjamin Dotse 07 October 2011

good poem written with great skills.keep it up.you are there

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Khalsa Majarafi 03 October 2011

nice poetry Berry, i think I understoood a little but not much because you may have a hidden meanings.

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