Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Sands Of Time Comments

Rating: 4.5

Yesterday
I
returned to
the beach
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Heather Burns
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 14 November 2014

A very beautiful poem on time and beautiful memories of the poet also.

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Yasmin Khan 15 September 2013

Footprints on the sands of time are memories of the departed. ''The little waves, with their soft, white hands, Efface the footprints in the sands, And the tide rises, the tide falls.''

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 12 September 2013

The death/loss in life is inevitable as for any creature of God.We know that we are dust and unto dust shall we return; still loneliness is intoleerable as I feel from this spiritual poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 11 September 2013

deep so deep manifestation fear future involved but a lovely only poet / poetess can think Ma'am thank you

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 September 2013

A wonderful poem....Footprints on sand get often washed away, but memories in our heart never get washed away. Very beautiful way you have presented, though ending is too sad to read.........Loved it.

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Dave Walker 11 September 2013

A fantastic poem, the memories will always be there.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 September 2013

Footprints are only temporary on a beach. On land they may turn into a footpath. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Aman Arora 10 September 2013

Has a nice easy feel to it, although the thought is abit sad.

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