Scorched Heart Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Scorched Heart

Rating: 5.0


There are no
Profound words
To express
My scorched heart

So screw you!

Monday, July 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: breaking up,broken future,broken heart
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 04 July 2018

Oh- forgot the rating. You get a dark and shadowy 10+++++++++++++++++++ for scaring me half out of my wits and I cannot afford it! ! ! I think your Kerouac series is going to be successful, my friend.

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Susan Williams 04 July 2018

Ah- - - now I see. The first five poems I read today were so unlike you- -angry, a seething, loathing, revengeful angry- -I am not accustomed to this darkness and this fixation on death from you- - then I read Poet's Notes. In the nick of time- I was fixing to saddle up Rocky Too and ride to the rescue [and I'm too old to be doing that- probably croak before I hit the Canadian border] Now reassure me by writing a poem full of light and joy and love of life, K?

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Carl Roussell 02 July 2018

A poetic arrow to the heart. A definite 10.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 July 2018

An awesome response, Carl!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 July 2018

Sometimes it happens in breaking up condition and words of heat are not expressed well. This provokes thought. An amazing sharing is done...10

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Richard Wlodarski 02 July 2018

Kumarmani, words of heat are never expressed well. I was being somewhat sarcastic with the poem. Just like Kerouac!

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