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Those were the intense eyes
That I frantically searched
Looking for the love they held for me,
And the yearning they showed for my touch.
But as I dived deeper into them
I could fathom what they held behind-
Never before seen longing
A love so divine
They were HER shrine.

How could I be so naïve
To be searching for a lie?
Every blink of your eye
Meant my failed try
To garner love for me.
What your eyes held behind
Was the love I came to see,
But it was for her
And not for me.

I may be with you
But will never be with you.
I know those eyes never lie
Hope has me looking up at the sky.

(19 October,2006)


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  • (10/24/2006 3:05:00 AM)

    A love triangle in equals each angle!
    What a sad geometrical figure?
    Triangulation is a dilemma?
    Splendid! Preeti Dartar.
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  • (10/22/2006 6:54:00 PM)

    Brilliant poem Preets!
    Glad to see these new ones!
    ~Amber~
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  • (10/19/2006 11:51:00 PM)

    This piece has the intensity of a heartfelt write. Your eyes can never lie; the truth is always seen through them. May peace and joy fill your heart and your eyes always be true.

    Scott
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  • (10/19/2006 9:36:00 AM)

    hey preets...

    a very heartfelt poem this 1...
    very intense...

    nice write...

    love...
    Asma...
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/19/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Why do these situations occur, the ones that win our Hearts, only to have our Heart tossed back, worn & torn? Tis destiny & chemistry....And as a rule, it all unfolds, (in the long run) in our favour.Solid piece Preeti'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR (Report)Reply

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  • (10/19/2006 12:47:00 AM)

    You poem speak your feelings well.Wonderful write as always.
    Ashish
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  • (10/19/2006 12:28:00 AM)

    How can I tell her about you
    Girl...pls tell me what to do
    Ahhh....The triangle.Interesting! !
    Love...TO
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  • (10/19/2006)

    preets...thank god one can read the truth in the eyes and lol...between the lines! ! ! ...intense poem...great read...love...nalini (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 20, 2010


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