Those were the intense eyes
That I frantically searched
Looking for the love they held for me,
And the yearning they showed for my touch.
But as I dived deeper into them
I could fathom what they held behind-
Never before seen longing
A love so divine
They were HER shrine.
How could I be so naïve
To be searching for a lie?
Every blink of your eye
Meant my failed try
To garner love for me.
What your eyes held behind
Was the love I came to see,
But it was for her
And not for me.
I may be with you
But will never be with you.
I know those eyes never lie
Hope has me looking up at the sky.
(19 October,2006)
How can I tell her about you Girl...pls tell me what to do Ahhh....The triangle.Interesting! ! Love...TO
You poem speak your feelings well.Wonderful write as always. Ashish
A love triangle in equals each angle! What a sad geometrical figure? Triangulation is a dilemma? Splendid! Preeti Dartar.
This piece has the intensity of a heartfelt write. Your eyes can never lie; the truth is always seen through them. May peace and joy fill your heart and your eyes always be true. Scott
hey preets... a very heartfelt poem this 1... very intense... nice write... love... Asma...
Why do these situations occur, the ones that win our Hearts, only to have our Heart tossed back, worn & torn? Tis destiny & chemistry....And as a rule, it all unfolds, (in the long run) in our favour.Solid piece Preeti'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
preets...thank god one can read the truth in the eyes and lol...between the lines! ! ! ...intense poem...great read...love...nalini