M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,498 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Searching Your Whereabouts! ! ! ! - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Scent of your words
lingers in my thoughts
mind is searching
your whereabouts.

Sometimes you carry grace of butterfly
soar sky’s height with eagle’s flight
deep Inside Sea you play hide and seek
you bloom like flower and fly like kite

You appear from the sound of jazz
and enter deep into my heart
in dance you look chrisom
sonnet in salsa or poetry in motion

Your secrets at night truly hide
like pearl in shells
sunrise blushes your burrow
and imaginations fantasize


Scent of your words
linger in my thoughts
mind is searching
your whereabouts..

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Searching Your Whereabouts! ! ! ! by M. Asim Nehal

  • (10/31/2015 1:43:00 PM)


    Whereabouts I m searching as well..,...... (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/31/2015 8:47:00 AM)


    A heart touching poem with thrilling expression nicely presented. I like most lines are....Sometimes you carry grace of butterfly
    soar sky’s height with eagle’s flight
    deep Inside Sea you play hide and seek
    you bloom like flower and fly like kite. Thanks for sharing....10
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  • (10/31/2015 8:17:00 AM)


    with love that is true
    there's nowhere to hide
    thanks Asim-10
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  • Ari Alsio (10/31/2015 4:37:00 AM)


    Scent of the our words
    heart on my ripening
    linger in my thoughts
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 31, 2015



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