James McLain

Gold Star - 40,778 Points (1958 - / From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By)

Self Denial - Poem by James McLain

She caused me to lose my thoughts of absolution.
Total self denial, her mind mine controls.
Running off,
I dumped it deep within the shaking moon.
Pulsating quasars, yellow stars,
the comets face is quickly turning bright,
burning inside out,
it made me strain my eyes to see the view.

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  • Unwritten Soul (4/30/2011 12:04:00 AM)

    Will the explosion create a small like supernova? ? will it be a chance to contribute to be a new star...denial and self denial but you know who is there to stand the real you are...self denial could be difficult but u know the answer just deny...like a supernova you will reform your new identity bright and blink in unique universe_Unwritten SOul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 29, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011

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