Self-Esteem's Small Size Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Self-Esteem's Small Size

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Should envies, jealousies pale the eyes,
Shed the mask worn, confront the disguise,
Look into mind's mirror,
At grumpy old fellow,
It is time to ponder
Why world's seen nigh yellow,
It might be your self-esteem's small size.
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Reflections | 01.04.13 |

Saturday, August 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: envy,greed,jealousy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Think; it is when we begin to look at the world with our envious eyes that we suffer from our self esteem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2019

Look into mind's mirror, At grumpy old fellow, It is time to ponder......insightful expression. A beautiful Limerick is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2019

You've put your finger on the right lines dear KM, thank you so much.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 August 2019

Limerick is sometimes hard to write. But the great Poet always do it with ease. I like your limericks. They do entertain and always have that wisdom to impart. A great write as always.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2019

You're right, limericks I think have great potential to say something more than to induce a laugh with some leg-pulling or otherwise. I wanted to change the face this form of poetry. With your feedback may be I'm partly successful. This I am penning again and be brief, the earlier one being wiped out.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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