Should envies, jealousies pale the eyes,
Shed the mask worn, confront the disguise,
Look into mind's mirror,
At grumpy old fellow,
It is time to ponder
Why world's seen nigh yellow,
It might be your self-esteem's small size.
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Reflections | 01.04.13 |
Limerick is sometimes hard to write. But the great Poet always do it with ease. I like your limericks. They do entertain and always have that wisdom to impart. A great write as always.
You're right, limericks I think have great potential to say something more than to induce a laugh with some leg-pulling or otherwise. I wanted to change the face this form of poetry. With your feedback may be I'm partly successful. This I am penning again and be brief, the earlier one being wiped out.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Look into mind's mirror, At grumpy old fellow, It is time to ponder......insightful expression. A beautiful Limerick is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.
You've put your finger on the right lines dear KM, thank you so much.