M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,438 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 107 Nature's Love. - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Cool river water
today weary a ripple
the smile on the lips

Topic(s) of this poem: love, nature

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 107 Nature's Love. by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/24/2016 1:57:00 PM)

    With the joy of the heart! ! Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (1/9/2016 4:50:00 PM)

    A beautiful haiku, Mohammed. Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (1/9/2016 12:42:00 PM)

    The poem is an unmistakable revelation of the relationship between the forces of nature and its link with and impact on human behaviour. Thank you, Md. Asim ji. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/9/2016 12:39:00 PM)

    Cool river water smiles with unlimited love. Very nice and interesting hakiu shared really.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 9, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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