Senryu - 123 Bubbles Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 123 Bubbles

Rating: 5.0


Cool river water
today weary a ripple
bubble on her cheek

Friday, March 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 16 March 2016

Ripple! But, with the beauty of her true love. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 04 March 2016

Such is the ebb and flow, interaction and perception

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Unwritten Soul 04 March 2016

...move along the flow that never ceased it goes follow the breeze never going slow till the air inside freed and burst....bubbly burst nice work

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