Senryu - 15 (Lamp Of Destiny) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 15 (Lamp Of Destiny)

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lamp of destiny
sometimes bright sometimes dim, still
fighting life's battle

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lamp of destiny
sometimes vivid sometimes faint,
still head is held high.

Thursday, September 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 September 2015

A marvellous haiku nicely depicted.Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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T Rajan Evol 10 September 2015

Name is Amazing. Lamp of Destiny, great imagery.

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Sanjukta Nag 10 September 2015

Another marvellous example.. You are the master of Haiku. thank you

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M Asim Nehal 10 September 2015

Thank you so much, beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.......

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