M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,492 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 15 (Lamp Of Destiny) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

lamp of destiny
sometimes bright sometimes dim, still
fighting life's battle

Alternate

lamp of destiny
sometimes vivid sometimes faint,
still head is held high.

Topic(s) of this poem: destiny, life

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 15 (Lamp Of Destiny) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/10/2015 1:59:00 PM)


    A marvellous haiku nicely depicted.Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. ....10 (Report) Reply

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  • (9/10/2015 10:42:00 AM)


    Name is Amazing. Lamp of Destiny, great imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/10/2015 3:01:00 AM)


    Another marvellous example.. You are the master of Haiku. thank you (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/10/2015 4:17:00 AM)

    Thank you so much, beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.......

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 10, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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