Senryu - 150 Our Relationship Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 150 Our Relationship

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our relationships
a cacophony, untamed
silent fantasy

Saturday, June 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

Trying to understand ourselves on earth. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 11 June 2016

Greate Senryu. A natural progression in relationship so effectively expresses.

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Darren Jkoeryo 11 June 2016

After some time the deep silence in relationship emerges when words are neither spoken or heard leading to cacophony untamed. Amazing Poem.

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