M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,206 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 16 (Memories - 3) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Memories mingle
my heart pitter-pattering
I hold back the tears

Memories tapping
Life a series of events
Secured safely

Wrapped in memories
Carrying the scents of love
without you besides.

Topic(s) of this poem: memories, memory

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 16 (Memories - 3) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/10/2015 11:05:00 AM)


    sometimes the person isn't beside us but the memory of him/her keeps us sane. very well written. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/26/2015 12:34:00 AM)

    Thanks Much......

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  • (9/10/2015 10:44:00 AM)


    God has blessed us with memory to remember things..Good write. I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • (9/10/2015 10:44:00 AM)


    God has blessed us with memory to remember things..Good write. (Report) Reply

  • (9/10/2015 6:04:00 AM)


    Memories in proportion like salt make us happy as salt gives taste to food. However, if memories dominate ones being, they may become liabilities and excess salt is bound to spoil taste of food.
    Thank you for your comment on Good Teacher.
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/26/2015 12:35:00 AM)

    Thanks Much for nice review.

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/10/2015 2:58:00 AM)


    Memories are part of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/10/2015 4:14:00 AM)

    Thank you so much for encouraging words.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 10, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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