Senryu - 197 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 197

Rating: 5.0


remember your past
let mind crawls along with thoughts
like moonlight at night

Saturday, October 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: past,senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 15 January 2017

Magical senryu. Great write. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 October 2016

Crawling like moonlight in the past is a wonderful idea, that his been nicely penned by Asim Nehal.

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Indira Renganathan 01 October 2016

Highly meaningful...a way to cherish our moon like bright deeds.....congrats Asim 10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 October 2016

Moon light at night reflects rays of calmness. Remembering past mind crawls among thoughts. Very amazing poem is drafted and shared....10

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