Senryu - 198 Between Us Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 198 Between Us

Rating: 5.0


between our silence
a story unfolds it's leaf
the moon shines brighter

Monday, October 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu,silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 15 January 2017

Moon is witness to a great love.

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Mihaela Pirjol 05 October 2016

How beautiful this is! It comprises so much more than what apparently seems to be. A rich and highly creative senryu.

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Nosheen Irfan 04 October 2016

Kamal kar dia. You never fail to impress the reader with your 3 liners. Weighty write.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 October 2016

The story of life! Thanks for sharing.

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