Senryu - 243 Magic Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 243 Magic

Rating: 5.0


on magic carpet
the gadfly stings the horse on
ice melting in eyes

Tuesday, December 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 07 December 2016

Great use of imagery, completed by its kinetic force.

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Seamus O Brian 06 December 2016

How beautiful and stirring is this image! Well done, fine poet.

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