poet M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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Senryu - 325

slept with empty eyes
woken up with full of dreams
like the waterfall

Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 20, 2020

Form: Senryu


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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (9/23/2020 5:06:00 AM)

    When you weak up with full dreams definitely you feel the truth of realization. An amazing poem is shared.

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  • Robert Murray SmithRobert Murray Smith (9/21/2020 6:52:00 AM)

    A very expressive write from the night of dreams.

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  • Kezia Kezia (9/21/2020 4:49:00 AM)

    very nice thought...thanks for sharing

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  • T Rajan Evol (9/21/2020 1:43:00 AM)

    Nicd Senryu with juxtaposition. Liked it waterfall took it to a different level all together.

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (9/21/2020 12:26:00 AM)

    A well inked poem.
    Truly awesome....5 stars +++

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  • Kostas LagosKostas Lagos (9/20/2020 3:13:00 PM)

    Wow! This is cool!

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