Senryu 5-The Reality Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Senryu 5-The Reality

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All smiles bears no sweet
All that shines is not pure gold
All tears tastes no salt

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Recognise not by looks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 30 April 2020

So true! Some time it is the passion that kills.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 March 2020

Facing the odds of love and life! ! Musing along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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In a world where everything seems fake it is unwise to take into account a momentary flash of real sincerity. Thank you very much

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 March 2020

Life's stark reality in three short lines in a lovely Haiku.

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Thank you very much Pathakji. Great comments for a small poem!

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Savita Tyagi 27 February 2020

Great Senryu. Life's reality expressed so poetically.

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Thank you Savitaji. When we remember certain realities of life in tranquility they are so powerful to wet our eyes amid warm sighs

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 February 2020

Excellent drop. With a strong message it makes interesting reading.Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you AKP. My experience in life teaches me to write like this

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Thank you AKP. The truth about my experience in life has taught me to believe what I have written

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