M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,172 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 70 (Love Equation) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

The love you give is
equal to the love you take
this equation goes on.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life, love

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 70 (Love Equation) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Valsa George (11/6/2015 10:27:00 PM)

    This is a lovely Senryu! I see a perfect equation between the two that will lead to an abiding relationship! A 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/6/2015 12:41:00 PM)

    There is balance in love giving and receiving in equal opportunity. A lovable poem shared with amazing lines.10 (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/6/2015 1:19:00 AM)

    True love always has this equation. Sad ending for the one sided love. Great write as usual.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Paul Warren (11/6/2015 1:01:00 AM)

    A bit like John Lennon. Nice one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 6, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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