Senryu - 78 Busy Day Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 78 Busy Day

Rating: 5.0


Tangerine morning
started peeling surprises
busy day ahead.

Thursday, November 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 12 November 2015

After a busy day a romantic evening of melting orange. A nice poem.

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Kelly Kurt 12 November 2015

Peeled the surprises, exposing segments of the day.

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Sanjukta Nag 12 November 2015

started peeling surprises Such an amazing imagination. Great 10+

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Loke Kok Yee 12 November 2015

sometimes your day can be this way thanks Asim-10

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