M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,218 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 78 Busy Day - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tangerine morning
started peeling surprises
busy day ahead.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, lifestyle

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 78 Busy Day by M. Asim Nehal

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/12/2015 12:35:00 PM)


    After a busy day a romantic evening of melting orange. A nice poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (11/12/2015 10:44:00 AM)


    Peeled the surprises, exposing segments of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/12/2015 9:55:00 AM)


    started peeling surprises
    Such an amazing imagination. Great 10+
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  • (11/12/2015 3:02:00 AM)


    sometimes your day can be this way
    thanks Asim-10
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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