M. Asim Nehal

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Senryu - 76 (Severity) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Graves are for words left
unsaid and deeds left undone,
and promises displeased

Topic(s) of this poem: life, lessons of life

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 76 (Severity) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/12/2015 9:57:00 AM)


    You stated an absolute truth, which is very a sad thing for human life.100+ (Report) Reply

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  • (11/12/2015 2:09:00 AM)


    and forgotten
    thanks Asim-10
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  • (11/11/2015 8:31:00 PM)


    A poignant and a meaningful write very well expressed in theses lines (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/11/2015 7:16:00 PM)


    Unsaid and deeds left undone seem to be humorous in this wise sharing. Graves are too amazing in left words. Wise sharing....10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/11/2015 6:40:00 PM)


    I think this grave is brain's unconscious part, apparently dead buy affects our thoughts when conscious is dormant and sometimes sends us in a land of sweet and nightmares.dreams. A nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/11/2015 12:54:00 PM)


    A very profound Senryu, Mohammed. Thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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