Senryu ~ A Walk

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along the seashore,
waves are rushing on to smash
like thoughts in my head

fallen stone in lake,
creates ripple in water
roadmap to success

M. Asim Nehal

Thursday, February 9, 2023

Topic(s) of this poem: journey

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Ricky Mangathen 09 February 2023

Great metaphor used, waves and ripple in water. I admire your imagination.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 11 February 2023

nice imagery is seized in poetic words

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 February 2023

Brilliant especially the last two lines

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 10 February 2023

A marvel! "Waves… like thoughts in my head". Just great, brilliant

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Richard Wlodarski 10 February 2023

A brilliant double senryu, Dr. Nehal! Love it!

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Nosheen Irfan 10 February 2023

Lines carrying the depth of ocean! Kudos!

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