Senryu -Change Of Season Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu -Change Of Season

Rating: 5.0


more than autumn sun
her skin hot like volcano
he now cooling down

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 12 November 2020

sun goes, moon comes summer, monsoon goes autumn come- by this way life goes, death comes to invite another life!

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Darren Jkoeryo 10 November 2020

Brilliantly done. Using gender is awesome

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Poetic Sky 10 November 2020

Yet another fantastic poem. You sre the best when it comes to Haiku and Senryu.

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Varsha M 10 November 2020

Congratulations sir for being popular poet. Good to see your name.

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Rajnish Manga 09 November 2020

A look at the most exciting relationships among all human beings on earth transforming itself in the wake of seasonal change- autumn can be the turning point. Thanks, Asim ji. This is awesomely articulated.

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