Senryu- Chocked Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu- Chocked

Rating: 5.0


a cold wet morning
frosted face in the mirror
all emotions chocked

Tuesday, December 27, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 30 December 2022

A natural outpour of expression....beautiful..A Very Happy New year To You Asim

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 28 December 2022

emotions are choked in foggy hallucination!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 December 2022

we do too but it is -10 with the wind chill

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David Wood 27 December 2022

Very good Senryu. We too have wet mornings but a warm 10C.

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