Senryu - Direct Connection Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Direct Connection

Rating: 5.0


storm removed the top
my hut talks to heavens now
direct connection

Sunday, May 23, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu,philosophical,life,god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suzon Albert 25 May 2021

Yes under d sky is direct connection with God. Gr8

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Deepak S S 25 May 2021

I see blessings in disguise. No matter what happens God is with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 May 2021

An amazing Senryu, this is straight to the goal, directly responded, a miracle, Mr. Asim Sir! 5 Stars full!

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Varsha M 24 May 2021

And i was imagining the hurricane devastation. You brought the scene of Wuhan flood and Oman flood. Thoughtful words.

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