Senryu-Fireworks Poem by Loke Kok yee

Senryu-Fireworks

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Fireworks all round
But it’s only October
Divorce papers filed

Senryu-Fireworks
Sunday, October 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simone Inez Harriman 02 July 2017

Fireworks and divorce are an apt correlation. There be a lot of fired up surprises I'd imagine.

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Paul Sebastian 28 October 2015

The many who suffer in quiet desperation!

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Valsa George 25 October 2015

Many couples are in this stage........! Explosions escaping the roofs.......... but not feasting the eyes, but deadening the ears! Neighbours suffer! interesting!

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M Asim Nehal 21 October 2015

Oh so sad, fighting is Ok but to file divorce paper...............Very well written.

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Melvina Germain 19 October 2015

You take up and you take me down, the fireworks were hot and but let me know immediately I was in for something blue. Well that divorce took me down oh yeah, so sad that thing. Great Senryu Loke Lok Yee.....

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