Senryu: In River Water Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

Senryu: In River Water

Rating: 4.5

In river water
Fishes take birth, grow and die
Leaving no remains!

Dated: 06th Jan 2023.





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Friday, January 6, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,leaving,river
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 07 January 2023

Good use of the poetic tool fish. Human beings in general...

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Pallab Chaudhury 07 January 2023

Rightly pointed out the fact... Thank you so much... Stay safe and healthy...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 January 2023

We need a real river water to get clean Bravo!

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Pallab Chaudhury 07 January 2023

True... With thanks.

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River water washes everything clean, itself too. Good

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Pallab Chaudhury 07 January 2023

Rightly written... Thanking you... With best wishes/PC

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